Writer’s Island Prompts: “The Message is the Bottle”
May 1, 2010since Read Write Poem is now history, Babbling on in Babylon has taken a journey to Writer’s Island to join a group of poetic castaways.
The first official new prompt is: MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE… pretend you found a bottle washed up on the beach here at Writer’s Island. Tell us in your words (poem, prose, flash fiction) about this message.
The Message is the Bottle
What was once transparent,
Now floats in a sea of crude,
The Earth Hemorrhages and cannot stop
From greed of man’s attitude.
The fish, the shrimp, dolphins and whales
Are casualties of the bottom line.
The bottle conceals dirty deals
For capital all by design.
How many bottles make up a gallon?
How many gallons does a barrel make?
It starts with making commodities
So profits roll in with the wake.
The message is the bottle,
As the bottle-nose dolphin dies,
Drill baby drill is momentarily lost
As the Earth bleeds and cries.
The Loyalty Oath and the Oil to Loathe
In the mirror of juxtapositions,
We see the face of the energy war.
It’s not the reflections of Osama bin Laden,
But Exxon and Mobile and more.
It’s the face of British Petroleum,
And Shell and Chevron that we see.
It’s the coalition of the filling stations
That exploits the Earth for greed.
It’s the Loyalty oath for the Big five,
As the president spouts “clean coal”?
A public servant for corporate order,
Who will cleanse the sins from our soul?
Poison pumps push the needles
In the oil fields off our coasts,
If you listen you can hear dead silence,
As marine life turn to ghosts.
The Big five plunder their poison pumps
For their economic loyalty oath,
But the mirror shows a sick planet,
From the lies and oil to loath.
excellent poems but sadly about the greed of mankind ruining the world and eventually all of us
Mark, you spent some time on this…timely sentiment, well done!
Thanks Marja. Such a sad commentary on our society. Thanks for dropping by. I’ll check out yours…your poem that is.
Best,
~Mark
Oh, jesus Mark this made me cry. So sad and so true.
Pamela
Thanks Linda. I try to write a lot about topical issues and events in poetry. Thanks for dropping by.
~Mark
Thanks, Pamela. It is sad. When will we as a species wake up to the fact that conquering nature for profit is to our own detriment as well as every living thing. We are suppose to be stewards of the Earth. I can’t bare to watch innocent animals getting caught up in this oil slick. It also tears me up inside.
Thanks,
~Mark
Imagine the same thing happening billions of times over.
Look up into the night sky and ask yourself again – Is there life on…
We rely too much on artificial intelligence for our natural stupidity.
Thanks, Stan!
~Mark
This is so current and tragic.
Terrific poems, Mark. But we – collectively – must share a part of the responsibility: do we not drive our cars sometimes when we should walk? Do we not demand cheap energy so we can heat our homes and manufacture un-needed goods? Sorry, I was carried away by the emotion in your poems.
ViV
Thanks, Vivienne. I’m glad you enjoyed my poems.
I think it all begins with policy decisions at the top. In Denmark, renewable energy is a huge priority for the government and its residents. Wind turbines create a clean and alternative energy for many residents. On the island of Samsot off the coast of Denmark, the island creates more wind energy for generators on the island that is not only free for the residents that power their homes and cars, but the island sells its reserve energy back to the Danish government for their grid. I think we should start making issues like energy and health care, national security issues. We should then nationalize clean energy and health care, and take the profit motives out of both which are currently destroying our country.
Thanks again, Vivienne!
~Mark
It is Anthony. Thanks for dropping by. Let’s hope we ALL wake up from the madness of oil drilling and turn to sustainable renewable enregies. Denmark is a great example of how a society can live sustainably.
Best,
~Mark
Ugh…I feel sick again! I can’t even believe all this shit that we do to our planet!!! Anyhow, nicely done. I made quick reference to this (not nearly as detailed or elegantly) on Day 29 of NaPoWriMo. http://rrosenchang.blogspot.com Anyhow, thanks for always carrying the torch of political commentary. Wish you could get some of your political poems in some newspapers. Have you considered this?
Thanks, Robin. I am in the process of ordering about twenty of my books and I am going to send them out to weekly and monthly magazines including The Nation, Harpers, The Atlantic, Mother Jones, etc. Hopefully I’ll get a bite. We’ll see.
Thanks as always for your comments!
~Mark
Our house is heated by geothermal energy, and this has worked brilliantly for the 3 years since it was built, supplemented by a woodburning stove (from our own coppiced wood) on the coldest days. Today, here in Northwest France the outside temperature is 4 degrees C, and the house is REALLY cold, despite the fire in the stove. Sometimes there is a downside to being ‘green’!
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