NaPoWriMo #28: “Intuition & Deja vu”

April 28, 2010

Intuition and Déjà vu
Tie the knot “again,”
They look into their braided lives,
As the laws of physics bend.

“I know I’ve met you here before,”
Said the pondering Déjà vu.
“I’m sure we’ve met in this same place
Like enigmas wrapped in clues.”

Intuition said:
“We will meet once again
in a strange Tautology class,
We will be Waiting for Godot,
As precious moments pass.

“We will conceive Coincidence,
And then Fluke and Lucky Shot,
Serendipity will bless our kids,
All in the same right spot.”

Déjà vu remarked as usual
“I’m sure you’ve said that before.”
“I knew you’d say that once again”
On this mystery tour.”

“It’s like we’re trapped in a temporal loop?
In a merry-go-round and again?”
Intuition said:
“We’ll become poets with A.D.D
But first we’ll start as friends.”

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Comments (17)
  1. vivienne blake Said,

    You really are on song today. Bravo.

  2. rallentanda Said,

    This is very clever.I love the 4th stanza. There is a poem in that one.

  3. Stan Ski Said,

    The perfect couple. Well done.

  4. Robin Said,

    Geez…how did you come up with this little gem?! First a two-sided acrostic, and now this…
    Can you let me know whatever it is you drink before you go to bed at night…?

  5. Derrick Said,

    How fortunate for the kids!

  6. Marie Said,

    Brilliant! I love it!

  7. admin Said,

    Thanks, Vivienne. My brain seems to sing even though it’s sometimes out of tune. :-)

  8. admin Said,

    Thanks, Rallentanda. I always like to personify interesting concepts. I think it works here.

    Thanks again!

    ~Mark

  9. admin Said,

    Thanks, Stan. They seem to be the perfect couple or will become the perfect couple!

    ~Mark

  10. admin Said,

    Thanks, Robin. The beverage I had last night was………a Budweisser :-( . Not my first choice, but my friend Spencer is a musician and songwriter and that was all he had.
    Ahhh, the magic of Budweisser.

    ~Mark

  11. admin Said,

    Thanks, Derrick. Yes, the kids must stay together. I fed them Chinese fortune cookies last night. :-)

    ~Mark

  12. admin Said,

    Thanks Marie. Great to have you as a friend!

    ~Mark

  13. Dan Rako Said,

    Didn’t I already read this one?

    Excellent!

  14. admin Said,

    Yes, Dan and you will strangely enough read it again later and ask the same question. ;-)

    Thanks!

    ~Mark

  15. pamela Said,

    Nice coupling Mark.
    Pamela

  16. Mark Lysgaard Said,

    I like coupling, cuddling, spooning…:-)

  17. lucychili Said,

    the black cat walks past past

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