NaPoWriMo #22: Wordles that Curdle
April 22, 2010Rust reverberates
In the medal of my mind.
Tendril memories curl around
The ancient coils of my childhood,
Like a vintage vine
creeping through the crevices.
A squall of crows fly like new ideas,
But disappear in my A.D.D emporium.
I am alone in the echo chamber of smoke and mirrors.
I live for moments of pepper and saffron;
Pepper keeps me grounded
While Saffron sends me to India.
But the dizzy Reverberating rust
Keeps meddling in my mind.
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I especially like
I live for moments of pepper and saffron
and your crow ideas
One of many good examples so far today.
Fun response to the prompt!
Bravo!
A sad but accurate summary for some.
This is written quite beautifully. Love your part about the saffron and the pepper.
Thanks, luckychili. This was a fun poem to construct. Thanks for dropping by. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best,
Mark
Thanks, Stan. These prompts have been fun and challenging.
~Mark
Thanks, Marianne for the prompt response
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~Mark
Thanks, Vivienne. It’s nice making a new friend in National Poetry Month.
~Mark
Need to get some rust remover
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Thanks, Derrick!
~Mark
Thanks, Robin. Two of my favorite ingredients.
Happy Thursday!
~Mark
Mark,
This is fantastic. Love this “I live for moments of pepper and saffron;
Pepper keeps me grounded”
Pamela
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